APPRECIATION & FEEDBACK ::: Hiya! Awesome bit :D I enjoyed myself reading that story (still am). I believe i might have found a typo (screenshot below);
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I might have found a typo. Let me know if that helped :D
TYPO TL;DR (details further below):
The word 'Thir' in the sentence;She begins to disrobe, firstly pulling off the tunic revealing her small breasts. The seer's sigil is tattoed just below thir collarbone.
I assume it was supposed to be Thin. Or, another word. Nonetheless, i couldn't find the definition anywhere and wanted to support your good work.
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WHERE: ''BELOW DECK, underbelly city'', after shenanigans' encounter, back on the Yacht);
WHEN: "YACHT", Waiting to go in the "Derelict liner";
WHO: Lumi; She/her (sub), Punishement;
WHAT (choices): Reader chooses to change he/him (his) mind while waiting a few hours to infiltrate the Derelict Liner from below when Automatons are assumed to be halved in numbers, then,
prompted text is followed by the typo ('Thir');
"That's Right." (to Lumi referring to being punished);
"Strip." (to Lumi, Lumi, tugging at the neckline of her tunic.);
Lumi nods excitedly.
She begins to disrobe, firstly pulling off the tunic revealing her small breasts. The seer's sigil is tattoed just below thir collarbone.
Okay so I found this while scrolling through itch the night before. Set aside time to go through and just got with the first run and exploring all the scenes and I thought to myself "Damn this was really good! I need to see what else Jemma has made..." And I LIterally bought Brute of Greengrave not even two weeks ago for my kindle and just never made the connection??? Now I have two things by you that I love!
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This is gorgeous. Thank you.
I enjoyed reading it so much that I got a bit aroused. And while I am waiting for a sequel, I am defeinitely looking into your other pieces of work.
APPRECIATION & FEEDBACK :::
Hiya! Awesome bit :D I enjoyed myself reading that story (still am).
I believe i might have found a typo (screenshot below);
***** SPOILER *** SPOILER *** *** SPOILER *** *** SPOILER ***
***** TEXT AND IMAGE AHEAD - FIRST TIMERS DO NO READ *****
I might have found a typo. Let me know if that helped :D
TYPO TL;DR (details further below):
The word 'Thir' in the sentence;She begins to disrobe, firstly pulling off the tunic revealing her small breasts. The seer's sigil is tattoed just below thir collarbone.
I assume it was supposed to be Thin. Or, another word. Nonetheless, i couldn't find the definition anywhere and wanted to support your good work.
*** SPOILER ***
*** SPOILER ***
*** SPOILER ***
*** SPOILER ***
WHERE: ''BELOW DECK, underbelly city'',
after shenanigans' encounter, back on the Yacht);
WHEN: "YACHT",
Waiting to go in the "Derelict liner";
WHO: Lumi;
She/her (sub), Punishement;
WHAT (choices): Reader chooses to change he/him (his) mind while waiting a few hours to infiltrate the Derelict Liner from below when Automatons are assumed to be halved in numbers, then,
prompted text is followed by the typo ('Thir');
"That's Right." (to Lumi referring to being punished);
"Strip." (to Lumi, Lumi, tugging at the neckline of her tunic.);
Lumi nods excitedly.
She begins to disrobe, firstly pulling off the tunic revealing her small breasts. The seer's sigil is tattoed just below thir collarbone.
(screenshot)
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Hope it helped. thanksfor the awesome product :D
played in Web Browser, itch.io, feb-02 2025
--WM
Okay so I found this while scrolling through itch the night before. Set aside time to go through and just got with the first run and exploring all the scenes and I thought to myself "Damn this was really good! I need to see what else Jemma has made..." And I LIterally bought Brute of Greengrave not even two weeks ago for my kindle and just never made the connection??? Now I have two things by you that I love!
I dont remember ever having so much fun reading, i enjoyed every bit of it.
Great game!