Very well written. I will say, it would be nice to confirm your own gender details at the start. There were a few times where after the 30th (exaggeration) time asking me if I have boobs or a chest, I would assume it was talking about my partner. But there's no way to go back and change it. I know it's for accessibility and I'm fine with all the ambiguity just an editorial note.
APPRECIATION & FEEDBACK ::: Hiya! Awesome bit :D I enjoyed myself reading that story (still am). I believe i might have found a typo (screenshot below);
***** TEXT AND IMAGE AHEAD - FIRST TIMERS DO NO READ *****
I might have found a typo. Let me know if that helped :D
TYPO TL;DR (details further below):
The word 'Thir' in the sentence;She begins to disrobe, firstly pulling off the tunic revealing her small breasts. The seer's sigil is tattoed just below thir collarbone.
I assume it was supposed to be Thin. Or, another word. Nonetheless, i couldn't find the definition anywhere and wanted to support your good work.
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WHERE: ''BELOW DECK, underbelly city'', after shenanigans' encounter, back on the Yacht);
WHEN: "YACHT", Waiting to go in the "Derelict liner";
WHO: Lumi; She/her (sub), Punishement;
WHAT (choices): Reader chooses to change he/him (his) mind while waiting a few hours to infiltrate the Derelict Liner from below when Automatons are assumed to be halved in numbers, then,
prompted text is followed by the typo ('Thir');
"That's Right." (to Lumi referring to being punished);
"Strip." (to Lumi, Lumi, tugging at the neckline of her tunic.);
Lumi nods excitedly.
She begins to disrobe, firstly pulling off the tunic revealing her small breasts. The seer's sigil is tattoed just below thir collarbone.
Okay so I found this while scrolling through itch the night before. Set aside time to go through and just got with the first run and exploring all the scenes and I thought to myself "Damn this was really good! I need to see what else Jemma has made..." And I LIterally bought Brute of Greengrave not even two weeks ago for my kindle and just never made the connection??? Now I have two things by you that I love!
OMG I needed this so much thank you T_T I've been looking for nsfw that isn't male gazey and your work did that and more. I love your characterizations of these three and how the sex scenes completely fit each of them perfectly. The idea of a seer being into bdsm where control is taken from this is both really hot and really cool at the same time.
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Very well written. I will say, it would be nice to confirm your own gender details at the start. There were a few times where after the 30th (exaggeration) time asking me if I have boobs or a chest, I would assume it was talking about my partner. But there's no way to go back and change it. I know it's for accessibility and I'm fine with all the ambiguity just an editorial note.
Deam, the best game of its kind, had never felt so exciting yo read something, good work keep it up :D
This is gorgeous. Thank you.
I enjoyed reading it so much that I got a bit aroused. And while I am waiting for a sequel, I am defeinitely looking into your other pieces of work.
APPRECIATION & FEEDBACK :::
Hiya! Awesome bit :D I enjoyed myself reading that story (still am).
I believe i might have found a typo (screenshot below);
***** SPOILER *** SPOILER *** *** SPOILER *** *** SPOILER ***
***** TEXT AND IMAGE AHEAD - FIRST TIMERS DO NO READ *****
I might have found a typo. Let me know if that helped :D
TYPO TL;DR (details further below):
The word 'Thir' in the sentence;She begins to disrobe, firstly pulling off the tunic revealing her small breasts. The seer's sigil is tattoed just below thir collarbone.
I assume it was supposed to be Thin. Or, another word. Nonetheless, i couldn't find the definition anywhere and wanted to support your good work.
*** SPOILER ***
*** SPOILER ***
*** SPOILER ***
*** SPOILER ***
WHERE: ''BELOW DECK, underbelly city'',
after shenanigans' encounter, back on the Yacht);
WHEN: "YACHT",
Waiting to go in the "Derelict liner";
WHO: Lumi;
She/her (sub), Punishement;
WHAT (choices): Reader chooses to change he/him (his) mind while waiting a few hours to infiltrate the Derelict Liner from below when Automatons are assumed to be halved in numbers, then,
prompted text is followed by the typo ('Thir');
"That's Right." (to Lumi referring to being punished);
"Strip." (to Lumi, Lumi, tugging at the neckline of her tunic.);
Lumi nods excitedly.
She begins to disrobe, firstly pulling off the tunic revealing her small breasts. The seer's sigil is tattoed just below thir collarbone.
(screenshot)
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Hope it helped. thanksfor the awesome product :D
played in Web Browser, itch.io, feb-02 2025
--WM
Okay so I found this while scrolling through itch the night before. Set aside time to go through and just got with the first run and exploring all the scenes and I thought to myself "Damn this was really good! I need to see what else Jemma has made..." And I LIterally bought Brute of Greengrave not even two weeks ago for my kindle and just never made the connection??? Now I have two things by you that I love!
I dont remember ever having so much fun reading, i enjoyed every bit of it.
Great game!
Thank you so much. It was very nice.
I loved this game! Please expand on it! I want to spend more time with my man, Bailey ❤
please give us save options or back buttons. your writing is wonderful, thank you.
roan omg.... ><
OMG I needed this so much thank you T_T I've been looking for nsfw that isn't male gazey and your work did that and more. I love your characterizations of these three and how the sex scenes completely fit each of them perfectly. The idea of a seer being into bdsm where control is taken from this is both really hot and really cool at the same time.
What font did you use for this? It has a lot of character.
Just one question
Will it be updated?
lumi .. holy freaking guacamole.....
Are the characters featured anywhere else in your storied? Because I'd love to see Roan again...
Ah, no. If nothing else, I'd have to choose a gender for them, which would be awkward.
That's fair. I just love how Roan was written so much!
Bailey my beloved
Wow, I love this so much. I really enjoy your writing and would love to read some more of it.