OMG I needed this so much thank you T_T I've been looking for nsfw that isn't male gazey and your work did that and more. I love your characterizations of these three and how the sex scenes completely fit each of them perfectly. The idea of a seer being into bdsm where control is taken from this is both really hot and really cool at the same time.
Delightful! I really appreciate the agency and liberty given to the player, and yet the writing was so nice and sexy I was still perfectly happy to go with what I figured the characters wanted of my protagonist. Everyone was lovable and memorable and I'm definitely going to replay a few times to see more options. Also, whoah, the worldbuilding! That world is so evocative!
Oh I love this so much. Love the stories for each characters, love the intimate moments. I caught myself smiling like a fool. Such a beautiful writing!
hey, i dunno if you (jemma topaz) still read these comments, but i feel like i’ve been the only hardcore fan of this game (mostly roan, actually, entirely roan) for over two years, to the point that my obsession has spawned new OCs, fanart, and smutty fanfiction. its been changing my brain chemistry since i played it girl!
sorry to leave you hanging for a month!!!! here's the link to my DW post with some basics about my oc and a fanfic i just finished: https://lesbocannibal.dreamwidth.org/1777.html and you can keep tabs on my DW if you want to see more about the ship! again thank you so much for writing this game!
What an incredible piece!! I play a lot of interactive fiction and this is one is definitely special. The world building, the dialogue, and the characters are really engaging. I was instantly drawn in to play the other routes as I finished my first.
I wish! Major medical issues have left me unable to program (at a keyboard, sitting up) for extended periods, so most of my creative work is now fiction.
I would love to return to this world, but it's unlikely.
This is actually incredible and I don't just mean the smutty bits. The world building and the incredibly clever ways the MC is left anonymous are genius. I'm a fan of in depth character creation but I found myself really loving how little we got to say about our MC and how it left everything to our imagination. And all the subtle hints or casual comments explaining what kind of world this is without a lore dump was so incredibly impressive to me. This is just an amazing short story as a whole and I really enjoyed it.
Also I was very surprised at how much I enjoyed Lumi's scenes. Actually learned something about myself lol. I love this story for what it is but I'm also going crazy trying to come up with some good scenarios for the Countess/Lumi threesome. I would definitely pay for a sequel or a dlc type thing.
You probably spent a lot of time making this. Damn, I wish I could have the time to learn and become as good as you. Not only the story, but also the level of programming really hit me hard. I have to login just to say this.
Just one problem. The game offer a lot of choices which I believe are not so matter. It would be better to have only around 10 or 12 choices in one chapter, I think
so well-written, really hot but with a light touch that feels propulsive and still game-y! amazing! so glad I stumbled on this from one of my bundles! Thank you for sharing and I would love to see more IF from you!
Hello! Your game was my first contact with NSFW text-based ficction. I had a wonderful experience with it, you write very well. As a Brazilian I would be very happy to see a PT BR option in your game, so more people can have the same wonderful experience I had. I work with translations, you can read more about it here.
Also, the option to change the gender of the characters is a nice touch, good work all around.
Thank you so much for making and sharing this amazing creation with the world! It is extremely well written, I love the characters, and the whole story is undoubtedly a super fun experience. The choose-your-own-adventure aspect was super fun and it all felt like a comprehensive and complete experience.
In addition, the 18+ elements were super enjoyable, but also made me feel positive — not something that’s often the case when enjoying this sort of media. It was extremely mature and tasteful and I loved the customizability of all the characters (pronouns, etc.), it made it feel like anyone could enjoy this.
The characters were all well-written, I really appreciated their different personalities and the flirtatious nature of the Marquessa. Overall, this is an amazing project and I hope to see more amazing things!
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please give us save options or back buttons. your writing is wonderful, thank you.
roan omg.... ><
OMG I needed this so much thank you T_T I've been looking for nsfw that isn't male gazey and your work did that and more. I love your characterizations of these three and how the sex scenes completely fit each of them perfectly. The idea of a seer being into bdsm where control is taken from this is both really hot and really cool at the same time.
What font did you use for this? It has a lot of character.
Just one question
Will it be updated?
lumi .. holy freaking guacamole.....
Are the characters featured anywhere else in your storied? Because I'd love to see Roan again...
Ah, no. If nothing else, I'd have to choose a gender for them, which would be awkward.
That's fair. I just love how Roan was written so much!
Bailey my beloved
Wow, I love this so much. I really enjoy your writing and would love to read some more of it.
This is GOOD.
Delightful! I really appreciate the agency and liberty given to the player, and yet the writing was so nice and sexy I was still perfectly happy to go with what I figured the characters wanted of my protagonist. Everyone was lovable and memorable and I'm definitely going to replay a few times to see more options.
Also, whoah, the worldbuilding! That world is so evocative!
though i do have a question, is the game under development? as it does say it is under status, but I just want to make sure
such a good game, would wish for some kind of sequal, but this was really good
I need more Lumi!!
and the Marquessa!
same!! im really interested in the Marquessa's relationship with the main character
really hope this is not the end. Hoping to see more soon!
yep, i wonder as it does say its in dev...
Unbelievably good
Nice game, it was really calming and cute even when you follow the seer dirty path xD
Im looking foward to more games like that now, ur so tallented
This game is so good. Never stop, please.
Oh I love this so much. Love the stories for each characters, love the intimate moments. I caught myself smiling like a fool. Such a beautiful writing!
hey, i dunno if you (jemma topaz) still read these comments, but i feel like i’ve been the only hardcore fan of this game (mostly roan, actually, entirely roan) for over two years, to the point that my obsession has spawned new OCs, fanart, and smutty fanfiction. its been changing my brain chemistry since i played it girl!
I do read them, yes! Are any of your OCs, fanart, fiction online? Link me! Either here or at twitter (@MonikerErsatz).
In any event, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
sorry to leave you hanging for a month!!!! here's the link to my DW post with some basics about my oc and a fanfic i just finished: https://lesbocannibal.dreamwidth.org/1777.html and you can keep tabs on my DW if you want to see more about the ship! again thank you so much for writing this game!
I love love love this game. Hits just the right spot in story and smut.
the most fun I've had in these style of games where its wall of text then answer a, b, and c
Short and sweet
I hate the fact that I can't download this game because it's so fucking good.
Man, i just played through this once and was extremely sad to see it end. I do hope thay there comes to be more at some point.
What an incredible piece!! I play a lot of interactive fiction and this is one is definitely special. The world building, the dialogue, and the characters are really engaging. I was instantly drawn in to play the other routes as I finished my first.
Will we ever be getting more of this?
I wish! Major medical issues have left me unable to program (at a keyboard, sitting up) for extended periods, so most of my creative work is now fiction.
I would love to return to this world, but it's unlikely.
insert darth vader yelling "NOOOOOO"
true, i've been searching for somethin as goood as this for months.
And unfortunately this is all we get
lumi lavender " the femboy " feels literally canon.
ey you got the same name as mine, wanna smash?
no.
Can we get a Android version pls
This is actually incredible and I don't just mean the smutty bits. The world building and the incredibly clever ways the MC is left anonymous are genius. I'm a fan of in depth character creation but I found myself really loving how little we got to say about our MC and how it left everything to our imagination. And all the subtle hints or casual comments explaining what kind of world this is without a lore dump was so incredibly impressive to me. This is just an amazing short story as a whole and I really enjoyed it.
Also I was very surprised at how much I enjoyed Lumi's scenes. Actually learned something about myself lol. I love this story for what it is but I'm also going crazy trying to come up with some good scenarios for the Countess/Lumi threesome. I would definitely pay for a sequel or a dlc type thing.
Thank you!
>Hi, I'm Lumi Lavender, she/her
You probably spent a lot of time making this. Damn, I wish I could have the time to learn and become as good as you. Not only the story, but also the level of programming really hit me hard. I have to login just to say this.
Just one problem. The game offer a lot of choices which I believe are not so matter. It would be better to have only around 10 or 12 choices in one chapter, I think
I believe it is because too much text would appear at once. and It can also help with immersion on the first playthrough.
so well-written, really hot but with a light touch that feels propulsive and still game-y! amazing! so glad I stumbled on this from one of my bundles! Thank you for sharing and I would love to see more IF from you!
evil big bad reveals herself and prepares her epic introduction.
Me: "I don't care."
Truly a perfect game.
absolutely need more of this
Hello! Your game was my first contact with NSFW text-based ficction. I had a wonderful experience with it, you write very well. As a Brazilian I would be very happy to see a PT BR option in your game, so more people can have the same wonderful experience I had. I work with translations, you can read more about it here.
Also, the option to change the gender of the characters is a nice touch, good work all around.
- With all respect, Alex
Hi Jemma,
Thank you so much for making and sharing this amazing creation with the world! It is extremely well written, I love the characters, and the whole story is undoubtedly a super fun experience. The choose-your-own-adventure aspect was super fun and it all felt like a comprehensive and complete experience.
In addition, the 18+ elements were super enjoyable, but also made me feel positive — not something that’s often the case when enjoying this sort of media. It was extremely mature and tasteful and I loved the customizability of all the characters (pronouns, etc.), it made it feel like anyone could enjoy this.
The characters were all well-written, I really appreciated their different personalities and the flirtatious nature of the Marquessa. Overall, this is an amazing project and I hope to see more amazing things!
Thank you :)
Thank you!
super fun
Super well written and hot!! love the unique format and amount you can customise in terms of gender/body!
This was fun and cute. I only wish it was more than just oral and hand play.